DSCN4601Her massive bulk sucks out the space, the
very air around her. To know her is to suffocate
in her toxic disapproval of Everything and Everyone
different from herself. Readily excusing her size as
genetics, she stuffs her face with sweets and soda
saying Coke was initially medicine and “I need the sugar,
I didn’t have breakfast.” My favourite person she is not.



One thought on “Her

  1. I love both the physical image and character commentary in this. Some wonderfully descriptive language, I particularly like the conveying of her ‘toxic disapproval’. People don’t have to be large to suck all the vitality out of a space! Great response to the challenge


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